Redemption

Subject: Re: Redemption Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:04 pm

Of course! I'm just gonna pause Legend Reborn for now. Not getting rid of it or anything.

Subject: Re: Redemption Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:02 am

I'm glad that you are continuing this story. I kinda wondered what happened to everyone. =)

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:54 pm

Chapter 4 has been rewritten! It's on page 1

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:59 pm

Great chapter Bill. We have found where Arata has been for the last 3 years. ^_^

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:00 pm

:O Is that box for what I think it is?! And who is Arata's mysterious contractor?

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:01 pm

I think that box is what you think it is. =P

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:05 pm

I don't think its what Kate thinks Arata thinks it is...

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Jan 24, 2011 1:02 am

It's not something that explodes then? =P

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Jan 24, 2011 6:21 am

I was going for something venomous actually :P

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:32 am

nope! its obviously some ice! yup, totally ice...

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:04 am

wouldn't that melt?

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:00 pm

But Arata has ice powers to keep is frozified! :P Anyway, enough of the off topic discussion, can't wait for your next chapter Bill! XD

Subject: Re: Redemption Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:54 pm

Chapter 5 has been rewritten! It's on page two

Subject: Re: Redemption Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:40 pm

orcs, goblins, and humans oh my. o_O Great chapter Bill. ^_^

Subject: Re: Redemption Tue Jan 25, 2011 9:47 pm

:O Great chapter BIlleh! One question though...what do orcs have to do with anything? :O How shall they affect our scattered heroes?

Subject: Re: Redemption Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:46 am

my guess is that they attack the king, and then someone has to do something about it. that was probably not helpful.

Subject: Re: Redemption Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:01 pm

Hmm, well, seeing as how I've kinda lost interest with this story, I think I might scrap everything and try to rewrite it. I had an idea today (for teh story thingy!) and it would require me to rewrite a few bits of The God King, but I'm willing to do so. Essentially, my idea places the Twilight Knights in the Sandsea attempting to battle the Chaos Djinn Tibicenas, and stuff goes down. They get into a battle with Sek-Duat (the god-king of the Sandsea [Ironic!]) and there will be twists and whatnot. If you guys have any ideas or thoughts, let me know, because I really want to write a proper ending to Bill's trilogy and then transition into Legend Reborn.

Subject: Re: Redemption Sat Apr 23, 2011 1:12 pm

Wait, they battle him in The God King, or the new version of Redemption? If it's in the God King, I hope it still retains the main story, because I like it D:

Subject: Re: Redemption Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:35 pm

It would be in the new story. Sek-Duat doesn't really fit into the God King. The new story would be centered around the Sandsea, is what I meant to say.

Subject: Re: Redemption Sun Apr 24, 2011 2:32 am

So yeah. Sek Duat would be in the new story (which I think Ima call "Shattered Heritage", or something along those lines). The only changes to the God King would be the epilogue and chapter....28, I think? It's the chapter where Bill gets bitten by a werewolf. He won't get bit in the rewrite. I don't think that worked out very well in Redemption. The new story will focus on the fall of the Twilight Knights, and the people that betrayed/hunted them.

Subject: Re: Redemption Mon Apr 25, 2011 5:47 pm

So, I guess that means that whoever is a moderator can lock or delete this story.